Wednesday, July 7, 2010

The next morning you come out of lust's undertow and...

...if you're lucky you find magic snoring next to you.


I did it. I did it. I did it.

Unlike the sad story in the songs?

I got to put feet in the most beautiful water on Earth.

I got my water from the Gulf to christen the boat.

I got to spend time on one of the most beautiful beaches on Earth.

It's been such a long time.







"She bitch slapped me
Then she drew me through the undertow.
Spit me out on a beach somewhere
I was dazed and sore
From her embrace
Yet all I could say was "...more..."
Her eyes they are green like the water I've seen
Of the coast of a Florida shore.
And her hair it hangs tangled
Like seaweed

She's like sugar mixed with sand
She scratches you on the way down
And smells of coconut rum
This one bites you
And that bite will delight you
As she walks long the shore in the sun
But never forget that the sweet that awaits you
Will scrape you and burn you my son.

You'll drink her all up
And she'll make you drunk
Then you'll throw up
The worst of her fun
But the drink will make hazey
The worst of the memory
And all you'll have left is the fun.

7 July 2010
AuthorAnn

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Okay I've started writing this and will let it settle for later edit. Going outside to do some stuff and enjoy the sunshine.

But there is something for you to think about.

I don't have to be miserable to write. The best that comes from here is when I'm happily telling stories.
And I have my daily dose of beach and sex.

Sunsilly.

:D







It's good.

Gotta go.

by Author Ann
7/7/2010

3 comments:

  1. Wanna change one part of the above poem,

    ""She bitch slapped me
    Then she drew me through the undertow.
    Spit me out on a beach somewhere
    I was dazed and sore
    From her embrace
    Yet all I could say was "...more..."
    Her eyes they are green like the water I've seen
    Of the coast of a Florida shore.
    And her hair it hangs tangled
    Like seaweed

    She's like sugar mixed with sand
    She scratches you on the way down
    And smells of coconut rum
    This one bites you
    And that bite will delight you
    As she walks long the shore in the sun
    But never forget that the sweet that awaits you
    Will scrape you and burn you my son.

    You'll drink her all up
    And she'll make you drunk
    Then you'll throw up
    The worst of her fun
    But the drink will make hazey
    The worst of the memory
    And all you'll have left is the fun.

    7 July 2010
    AuthorAnn
    "


    to this:


    ""She bitch slapped me
    Then she drew me through the undertow.
    Spit me out on a beach somewhere
    I was dazed and sore
    From her embrace
    Yet all I could say was "...more..."
    Her eyes they are green like the water I've seen
    Of the coast of a Florida shore.
    And her hair it hangs tangled
    Like seaweed

    She's like sugar mixed with sand
    She scratches you on the way down
    And smells of coconut rum
    This one bites you
    And that bite will delight you
    As she walks long the shore in the sun
    But never forget that the sweet that awaits you
    Will scrape you and burn.

    You'll drink her all up
    And she'll make you drunk
    Then you'll throw up
    The worst of her fun
    But the drink will make hazey
    The worst of the memory
    And all you'll have left is the fun.

    7 July 2010
    AuthorAnn
    "


    Can you find the change?

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  2. Need a title

    I'm thinking maybe

    "10:37 AM..."


    What do you think?

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  3. funny.

    The lyrics to the Goldfrapp song, Happiness


    Join our group and you will find
    Harmony and peace of mind
    Make it better
    We're here to welcome you

    We're all on a journey to
    Finding the real inner you
    Make it better
    We're here to welcome you

    Time stops still when
    You've lost love

    Happiness
    How'd you get to be happiness
    How'd you get to find love, real love
    Love, love, love

    Floating in a magic world
    Donate all your money we'll
    Make it better
    We're here to welcome you

    We can see a troubled soul
    Give us all your money we'll
    Make it better
    We're here to welcome you

    Time stops still when
    You've lost love

    Happiness
    How'd you get to be happiness
    How'd you get to find love, real love
    Love, love, love

    We'll be swimming in the sea
    Of wisdom and serenity
    Make it better

    Happiness
    How'd you get to be happiness
    How'd you get to find love, real love
    Love, love, love

    Happiness
    How'd you get to be happiness
    How'd you get to find love, real love
    Love, love, love

    Happiness
    How'd you get to be happiness
    How'd you get to find love, real love
    Love, love, love

    Happiness
    How'd you get to be happiness
    How'd you get to find love, real love
    Love, love, love




    Funny, considering the subject matter of the post. Sigh, no one noticed.


    I don't think that anyone is reading. There's just so many hours in a day.

    Things to do.

    Things to do.


    Ann

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