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"Who do you think you are?" he asked. The look in his eye was fierce and unkind. At that moment? I knew that he didn't care for me at all. Never would. There was no excuse for it. No reason to endure any longer."
From the very short story, "Wrong Way 'Round"
by c anne ford
11 April, 2012
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I'm thinking of taking this comment,
ReplyDelete"Who do you think you are?" he asked. The look in his eye was fierce and unkind. At that moment? I knew that he didn't care for me at all. Never would. There was no excuse for it. No reason to endure any longer."
and changing it a bit.
How does this sound?
"Who do you think you are?" she asked. The look in her eye was fierce and unkind. At that moment? I knew that she didn't care for me at all. Never would. There was no excuse for it. No reason to endure any longer."
The great thing is that since I wrote both? The change is good.
LOL.
I'm thinking that it might be interesting to write both stories at the same time. Just change the personal pronouns to the opposite sex.
LOL. Wonder where this story will end up?
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